Picking up where I have been leaving off with my sci fi WIP. You can see past parts below:
In this snippet our protagonist gets close and personal with her would be hero. This will be the last of my sci-fi rescue, I’ll be jumping ahead next week – I can’t give away how they get out after all!
His body always appeared hard to me, I’m surprised to find it smooth and soft.
My head topples against his chest just above his heart and I try to will my eyes closed so I can savour the
moment. Defiantly they remain open, staring at the cold walls of my prison. He’s saying something, I can hear the droning of his voice and feel the vibrations through his chest but my ears are still full of the clear amber liquid that filled our cells and I can’t understand the words.
His voice is low though, and soothing I’m sure I could listen to that voice forever.
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