Continuing on with the story. Our girl has been held captive and saved from a technician who works at the compound. Now she finds herself in a small, dark room. Did she trade one confine for another? Is this just one stop in her long trip to freedom?
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Now onto the hook!
A small flame lights up the room causing the dull pain in my head to turn into a searing ache and I finally see the man sitting on the bed with me.
The technician; his eyes are darker now than they appeared in the cell, though still like small crystals of not exactly blue. His face is hard but soft, a contradiction I can’t understand or fully explain. His brow creases with an emotion I don’t recognize as he slowly stands and backs away from me.
Never taking his eyes from mine he goes to a hole in the wall and moves the fabric covering it. Sunlight shines in and my head threatens to explode.
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